Republic of Korea
Republic of Korea's Comments
on the Zero Draft of the Post-2015 Outcome Document
I. Preamble
Elements of dignity and justice, as referenced in the UN Secretary-General's
Synthesis Report, should be included in the Preamble. Additionally, we suggest to
include the language of paragraphs 3 and 4 in the Preamble to streamline the text,
which would amend the paragraph to read:
"This Agenda is a plan of action for people, planet and prosperity that also seeks to
strengthen universal peace in larger freedom grounded in justice. All countries
and people acting in collaborative partnership will implement the Agenda.
Recognizing that poverty eradication is the greatest global challenge and an
indispensable requirement for sustainable development, we are resolved to
free the human race from the tyranny of poverty and want and to heal and
secure our planet for present and future generations. We are determined to take
the bold and transformative steps needed to shift the world on to a sustainable and
dignified future. As we embark on this great collective journey, we pledge that no
one will be left behind and wish to see the goals and targets met for all
economic and social groupings."
Taking into account the outcome of the Twelfth meeting of the Conference of the
Parties to the Convention on Biological Diversity (COP 12) held in 2014, we suggest
adding a reference to biodiversity and the ecosystem to the 7
th bullet point to read:
"Protect the planet including its biodiversity and ecosystems, fight climate
change, use natural resources sustainably and safeguard our oceans;"
II. Declaration
Introduction
1. Paragraphs 3 & 4
As similar content is covered in the Preamble, we suggest to incorporate the paragraphs
into the Preamble, and delete them from the Declaration.
2. Paragraphs 5 & 6
As the content of the two paragraphs are linked in the sustainable development agenda setting
process, we propose to combine the two paragraphs into one that would read:
"This Agenda is of unprecedented scope and significance. Having consulted widely
with stakeholders, and having made a special effort to listen to the voices and concerns
of the poorest and the vulnerable, we are adopting a universal Agenda for sustainable
development that is accepted by all countries and applicable to all. This first ever
global compact for human development and preservation of the planet has been agreed
following two years of intensive public consultation and engagement around the world.
We commit ourselves to working tirelessly for its implementation and for the
attainment by 2030 of our shared vision."
3. Paragraph 7
We propose to consolidate the paragraph with other similar language in the Preamble
and delete the paragraph.
4. Paragraphs 8 & 9
The two paragraphs focus on the relationship between the MDGs and the new development
agenda, and should be combined into one that would read:
"The new Agenda builds on the Millennium Development Goals, agreed almost fifteen
years ago. The MDGs provided an important framework for development and
significant progress has been made in a number of areas. But the progress has been
uneven and some of the Goals remain off-track. We recommit ourselves to the full
realization of what the MDGs did not achieve. In its scope, however, the framework we
are announcing today goes far beyond the MDGs. Alongside traditional development
priorities such as health, education and food security and nutrition, it sets out a wide
range of economic and environmental objectives and also promises more peaceful,
better governed and inclusive societies. Reflecting the integrated approach that we have
agreed, there are deep interconnections and many cross-cutting elements across the
new goals and targets."
Our commitment and shared principles
1. Paragraph 11
As paragraph 11 references the fundamental principles that will guide the new agenda, we
propose to place this paragraph before the current paragraph 10. Additionally, to
clarify and more comprehensively refer to international human rights instruments,
we propose to amend the paragraph to read:
"The new Agenda is guided by the purposes and principles of the Charter of the United
Nations, including full respect for international law. It is grounded also in the
Universal Declaration of Human Rights and other international human rights
instruments including the Declaration on the Right to Development. We reaffirm all
the principles of the Rio Declaration on Environment and Development, including,
inter alia, the principle of common but differentiated responsibilities.
2. Paragraphs 13 & 14
Both paragraphs discuss the integrated and balanced approach of the three dimensions of
sustainable development, and we suggest combining the two paragraphs to read:
"These challenges are interrelated and call for new, effective and integrated solutions.
Sustainable development recognizes that eradicating poverty and inequality, preserving
the planet and creating inclusive economic growth are linked to each other and
interdependent. It is for this reason that we have decided on a set of integrated and
indivisible goals which balance three crucial dimensions: the economic, the social and
the environmental. Furthermore, these are universal goals which transcend the
traditional North/South divide and involve the entire world, rich and poor countries
alike, in a new global compact for the betterment of humanity."
3. Paragraph 15
Considering the importance of the environment, we propose to add "in an
environmentally sound manner." We also suggest to include a reference to "lifelong
learning" to reflect the language from SDG 4. The amended paragraph would read:
"In the goals and targets which we have agreed, we are setting out a supremely
ambitious vision. We envisage a world free of poverty, hunger, disease and want in an
environmentally sound manner. A world, for example, of safe and nutritious food; of
affordable drinking water; of universal access to basic education and lifelong learning;
of physical, mental and social well-being. A world of universal respect for human
rights and human dignity; of justice and equality; of respect for race and ethnicity; and
of equal opportunity permitting the full realization of human potential while promoting
shared prosperity. A world in which every woman and girl enjoys full gender equality
and all barriers to their empowerment in our societies have been removed. A just,
equitable, tolerant and inclusive world. And one in which humanity lives in complete
harmony with nature."
The new Agenda
1. Paragraphs 16 & 19
We propose to combine paragraph 16 with paragraph 19 to consolidate related content
and to streamline the text. The combined paragraph would read:
"We are announcing today 17 Goals with 169 associated targets which will come into
effect on 1 January 2016 and guide the decisions we take over the next fifteen years.
Never before have world leaders pledged common action and endeavour across such a
broad policy agenda. We are setting out together on the path towards sustainable
development, devoting ourselves collectively to the implementation of the Agenda at
the regional and global levels for the full benefit of all, including present and future
generations. In doing so, we will take into account different national realities,
capacities and levels of development and respect each country’s policy space for
economic growth, while emphasizing that the Agenda will be implemented in a
manner that is consistent with the rights and obligations of states under international
law."
2. Paragraphs 18 & 21
The importance of the participation of the marginalized and vulnerable population
should be better highlighted, and the challenges facing people affected by conflict,
terrorism, and humanitarian emergencies should be considered. In this regard we
propose to combine paragraphs 18 and 21 as indicated:
"Working for gender equality and the empowerment of women and girls will make a
crucial contribution to progress across all the goals and targets. The achievement of
full human potential and of sustainable development is not possible if one half of
humanity continues to be denied its full rights and opportunities. This is also a basic
issue of human rights. Women and girls must enjoy equal access to education and
equal opportunities for employment with men and boys. All forms of gender inequality,
gender-based discrimination and violence against women and children, both boys and
girls, will be combatted. Marginalized and vulnerable populations–including
women, children, youth, people living with disability, older people, migrants, and
indigenous peoples–must fully participate in creating enabling environments for
the implementation of the Agenda. Severe challenges faced by people living in
areas affected by conflict, terrorism and complex humanitarian emergencies must
also be addressed."
3. Paragraph 22
We support the use of agreed language on education as reflected in SDG 4. The
importance of lifelong learning opportunities should be reflected, as well as a reference
to the 2015 World Education Forum, where worldwide leaders in education gathered to
discuss education-related goals of the Post-2015 Development Agenda. We propose to
amend the paragraph to read:
"We commit to providing inclusive and equitable quality education at all levels–early
childhood, primary, secondary and tertiary. All people irrespective of gender, age, race
or ethnicity, including persons with disabilities, indigenous peoples, children and youth
in vulnerable situations, should have access to lifelong learning opportunities that
helps them acquire the knowledge and skills needed to exploit opportunities, to
participate fully in society. We welcome the outcome of the World Education
Forum 2015."
4. Paragraph 27
Land is an important aspect of environmental issues, thus we suggest adding language on
restoration of degraded land, as included in the outcome document of CBD COP12, to
read:
"We are determined to address decisively the threat posed by climate change and
environmental degradation. The global nature of climate change calls for the widest
possible international cooperation aimed at accelerating the reduction of global
greenhouse gas emissions. Looking ahead to the COP 21 conference in Paris in
December, we underscore the historic responsibility of all States to work for a
meaningful and universal climate agreement which will put in place this essential
component of a sustainable world. We must also safeguard our oceans and seas,
protect biodiversity, restore degraded land and promote resilience and disaster
preparedness."
5. Paragraphs 28
While we welcome the reference to good governance, the current text should be further
strengthened. The importance of good governance based on transparency,
accountability, and participation should be better highlighted.
"Sustainable development cannot be realized without peace. The new Agenda
recognizes the need to build peaceful, just and inclusive societies, based on respect for
human rights (including the right to development), the rule of law, good governance
based on transparency, accountability, and participation, as well as effective and
accountable institutions. These are fundamental requirements for the achievement of
sustainable development. Factors which give rise to violence, insecurity and injustice,
such as corruption and poor governance, are addressed in the Agenda. We must
redouble our efforts to resolve or prevent conflict and to support countries emerging
from conflict situations so as to lay the foundations for sustainable development. We
commit to remove the obstacles to the full realization of the right of self- determination
of peoples living under colonial and foreign occupation, which continue to adversely
affect their economic and social development as well as their environment"
Implementation
General comment on the section
The section should reflect in a balanced manner the importance of all financial
flows and actors in the context of an evolving development landscape, as well as
the basic principle that each country has primary responsibility for its own
economic and social development
Creating domestic enabling environments, sound policies and institutions at country
level as the key to poverty eradication and sustainable development must be further
emphasized.
1. Paragraph 30
We propose to add a reference to the importance of an enabling environment as well as
principles of Global Partnership.
"The new Agenda deals also with the means required for implementation of the goals
and targets. We recognize that these will require the mobilization of financial resources
(both public and private, domestic and international) as well as an enabling
environment, capacity- building, the transfer of environmentally sound technologies
and a wide range of other supportive policies and measures. Business, the private
sector and philanthropic organizations will feature prominently in relation to resource
mobilization and implementation of the Agenda. We also emphasize the importance
of internationally agreed principles of the Global Partnership, including the
development effectiveness principles."
2. Paragraph 31
We propose to clearly reference that the Addis Ababa outcome document will become the
MOI pillar of the Post-2015 Development Agenda.
"We welcome and endorse fully the outcome document of the Third International
Conference on Financing for Development, held in Addis Ababa from 13-16 July 2015.
We acknowledge that the Addis outcome constitutes the means of implementation
(MOI) pillar of the post-2015 development agenda."
3. Paragraph 32
The current text overemphasizes the role of ODA. To also reflect the importance of
domestic resource mobilization in a more balanced manner, we propose to amend the
paragraph as the following:
"The mobilization and effective use of domestic resources is at the crux of our
common pursuit of sustainable development and achieving the SDGs, underscored by
the principle of national ownership. We will endeavour to create domestic enabling
environment and encourage private business activity, investment and innovation as
major drivers of productivity, inclusive economic growth, and job creation, providing
people with the opportunity to overcome poverty and inequality."
4. Paragraph 35
We believe national policy space should be consistent with relevant international rules.
"We acknowledge the need for international financial institutions to respect the
domestic policy space of all countries, while respecting international principles and
commitments pertaining to effective development cooperation. We agree to work
to increase the representation of developing countries, and their involvement in
decision-making, in these institutions."
A call for action to change our world
1. Paragraphs 41 & 42
To consolidate relevant content, we propose to combine the two paragraphs to read:
"Today we are taking a decision of comparable significance. Ours can be the first
generation to succeed in ending poverty; just as we are the last to have a chance of
saving the planet. We have resolved to build a better future for millions of people in
our world, millions who have been denied the chance to lead decent, dignified and
rewarding lives and to achieve their full human potential. The world will be a better
place in 2030 if we succeed in our objectives. What we are announcing today – an
agenda for global action for the next fifteen years – is a charter for people and planet in
the twenty-first century."
2. Paragraphs 43 & 44
To consolidate relevant content, we propose to combine the two paragraphs to read:
"“We the Peoples” are the celebrated opening words of the UN Charter. It is “We the
Peoples” who are embarking today on the road to 2030. Our journey will involve
Governments, Parliaments, local authorities, business and the private sector, the
scientific and academic community, civil society – and ordinary citizens. Millions have
already engaged with, and will own, this agenda. It is an agenda by and for the people
– and this, we believe, will ensure its success. The future of humanity and of our planet
lies in our hands. It lies also in the hands of today’s younger generation, who will pass
the torch to future generations. We have mapped the road to sustainable development;
it will be for all of us to ensure that the journey is irreversible."
III. Sustainable Development Goals and Targets
1. Paragraph 3
The reference to the timetable of finalizing the global indicator by March 2016 is too
technical, and would not be appropriate to include in the outcome document. We suggest
deleting the reference to amend the paragraph to read:
"The goals and targets will be followed-up and reviewed using a set of global
indicators. These shall be complemented by indicators at the regional and national
level to be developed by member states. Under the guidance of the Economic and
Social Council and the UN Statistical Commission, the global indicator framework will
be developed by the Inter Agency and Expert Group on SDG Indicators. This
framework will be simple yet robust, address all SDGs and targets and preserve the
political balance and ambition contained therein."
IV. Means of Implementation and the Global Partnership
1. Paragraph 5
The fulfillment of ODA commitments is overemphasized, and the paragraph should be
amended with more balanced language as the following:
"Domestic public resources mobilization will continue to be crucial. We acknowledge
the power and reach of financial inclusion. We note also the critical importance of
private finance and we call on businesses to apply their creativity and innovation and
to engage as partners in the development process. International public finance remains
key and ODA plays a central role in complementing domestic resources."
V. Follow-up and Review
1. Paragraph 1
The element of the universality needs to be added.
"A robust, universal, effective, inclusive and transparent follow-up and review
framework, operating at the national, regional and global levels, will promote effective
implementation of this Agenda and accountability to our citizens."
2. Paragraph 3
The review of effectiveness of development cooperation should constitute an integral part
of the overall review progress. In this regard, the principles of effective development
cooperation – national ownership, focus on results, inclusive partnership, transparency and
accountability – should be highlighted in the document. Shared responsibility and
universality are also important elements that should be reflected in the text. Lastly, we
suggest the addition of the Global Partnership for Effective Development Cooperation
(GPEDC) as a good example of existing platforms.
"Follow-up and review processes shall be guided by the following principles:
a. They will address progress in implementing the goals and targets, including the
means of implementation, in a manner which respects their integrated and interrelated
nature, as well as the quality of development cooperation based on
the principles of national ownership, focus on results, inclusive partnership,
and transparency and accountability.
b. They will maintain a longer-term orientation, identify achievements and critical
success factors, support countries in making informed policy choices and
mobilize the necessary means of implementation and partnerships;
c. They will be universal, open and inclusive, supported by an enabling
environment for the participation of all people and stakeholders, based on
shared responsibility.
d. They will build on existing platforms and processes, including the Global
Partnership for Effective Development Cooperation, evolve over time and
minimize the reporting burden on national administrations.
e. They will be rigorous and evidence-based, informed by data which is timely,
reliable and disaggregated by income, gender, age, race, ethnicity, migratory
status, disability, geographic location and other characteristics relevant in
national contexts. Support for developing countries, particularly LDCs, to
strengthen national data systems is critical."
on the Zero Draft of the Post-2015 Outcome Document
I. Preamble
Elements of dignity and justice, as referenced in the UN Secretary-General's
Synthesis Report, should be included in the Preamble. Additionally, we suggest to
include the language of paragraphs 3 and 4 in the Preamble to streamline the text,
which would amend the paragraph to read:
"This Agenda is a plan of action for people, planet and prosperity that also seeks to
strengthen universal peace in larger freedom grounded in justice. All countries
and people acting in collaborative partnership will implement the Agenda.
Recognizing that poverty eradication is the greatest global challenge and an
indispensable requirement for sustainable development, we are resolved to
free the human race from the tyranny of poverty and want and to heal and
secure our planet for present and future generations. We are determined to take
the bold and transformative steps needed to shift the world on to a sustainable and
dignified future. As we embark on this great collective journey, we pledge that no
one will be left behind and wish to see the goals and targets met for all
economic and social groupings."
Taking into account the outcome of the Twelfth meeting of the Conference of the
Parties to the Convention on Biological Diversity (COP 12) held in 2014, we suggest
adding a reference to biodiversity and the ecosystem to the 7
th bullet point to read:
"Protect the planet including its biodiversity and ecosystems, fight climate
change, use natural resources sustainably and safeguard our oceans;"
II. Declaration
Introduction
1. Paragraphs 3 & 4
As similar content is covered in the Preamble, we suggest to incorporate the paragraphs
into the Preamble, and delete them from the Declaration.
2. Paragraphs 5 & 6
As the content of the two paragraphs are linked in the sustainable development agenda setting
process, we propose to combine the two paragraphs into one that would read:
"This Agenda is of unprecedented scope and significance. Having consulted widely
with stakeholders, and having made a special effort to listen to the voices and concerns
of the poorest and the vulnerable, we are adopting a universal Agenda for sustainable
development that is accepted by all countries and applicable to all. This first ever
global compact for human development and preservation of the planet has been agreed
following two years of intensive public consultation and engagement around the world.
We commit ourselves to working tirelessly for its implementation and for the
attainment by 2030 of our shared vision."
3. Paragraph 7
We propose to consolidate the paragraph with other similar language in the Preamble
and delete the paragraph.
4. Paragraphs 8 & 9
The two paragraphs focus on the relationship between the MDGs and the new development
agenda, and should be combined into one that would read:
"The new Agenda builds on the Millennium Development Goals, agreed almost fifteen
years ago. The MDGs provided an important framework for development and
significant progress has been made in a number of areas. But the progress has been
uneven and some of the Goals remain off-track. We recommit ourselves to the full
realization of what the MDGs did not achieve. In its scope, however, the framework we
are announcing today goes far beyond the MDGs. Alongside traditional development
priorities such as health, education and food security and nutrition, it sets out a wide
range of economic and environmental objectives and also promises more peaceful,
better governed and inclusive societies. Reflecting the integrated approach that we have
agreed, there are deep interconnections and many cross-cutting elements across the
new goals and targets."
Our commitment and shared principles
1. Paragraph 11
As paragraph 11 references the fundamental principles that will guide the new agenda, we
propose to place this paragraph before the current paragraph 10. Additionally, to
clarify and more comprehensively refer to international human rights instruments,
we propose to amend the paragraph to read:
"The new Agenda is guided by the purposes and principles of the Charter of the United
Nations, including full respect for international law. It is grounded also in the
Universal Declaration of Human Rights and other international human rights
instruments including the Declaration on the Right to Development. We reaffirm all
the principles of the Rio Declaration on Environment and Development, including,
inter alia, the principle of common but differentiated responsibilities.
2. Paragraphs 13 & 14
Both paragraphs discuss the integrated and balanced approach of the three dimensions of
sustainable development, and we suggest combining the two paragraphs to read:
"These challenges are interrelated and call for new, effective and integrated solutions.
Sustainable development recognizes that eradicating poverty and inequality, preserving
the planet and creating inclusive economic growth are linked to each other and
interdependent. It is for this reason that we have decided on a set of integrated and
indivisible goals which balance three crucial dimensions: the economic, the social and
the environmental. Furthermore, these are universal goals which transcend the
traditional North/South divide and involve the entire world, rich and poor countries
alike, in a new global compact for the betterment of humanity."
3. Paragraph 15
Considering the importance of the environment, we propose to add "in an
environmentally sound manner." We also suggest to include a reference to "lifelong
learning" to reflect the language from SDG 4. The amended paragraph would read:
"In the goals and targets which we have agreed, we are setting out a supremely
ambitious vision. We envisage a world free of poverty, hunger, disease and want in an
environmentally sound manner. A world, for example, of safe and nutritious food; of
affordable drinking water; of universal access to basic education and lifelong learning;
of physical, mental and social well-being. A world of universal respect for human
rights and human dignity; of justice and equality; of respect for race and ethnicity; and
of equal opportunity permitting the full realization of human potential while promoting
shared prosperity. A world in which every woman and girl enjoys full gender equality
and all barriers to their empowerment in our societies have been removed. A just,
equitable, tolerant and inclusive world. And one in which humanity lives in complete
harmony with nature."
The new Agenda
1. Paragraphs 16 & 19
We propose to combine paragraph 16 with paragraph 19 to consolidate related content
and to streamline the text. The combined paragraph would read:
"We are announcing today 17 Goals with 169 associated targets which will come into
effect on 1 January 2016 and guide the decisions we take over the next fifteen years.
Never before have world leaders pledged common action and endeavour across such a
broad policy agenda. We are setting out together on the path towards sustainable
development, devoting ourselves collectively to the implementation of the Agenda at
the regional and global levels for the full benefit of all, including present and future
generations. In doing so, we will take into account different national realities,
capacities and levels of development and respect each country’s policy space for
economic growth, while emphasizing that the Agenda will be implemented in a
manner that is consistent with the rights and obligations of states under international
law."
2. Paragraphs 18 & 21
The importance of the participation of the marginalized and vulnerable population
should be better highlighted, and the challenges facing people affected by conflict,
terrorism, and humanitarian emergencies should be considered. In this regard we
propose to combine paragraphs 18 and 21 as indicated:
"Working for gender equality and the empowerment of women and girls will make a
crucial contribution to progress across all the goals and targets. The achievement of
full human potential and of sustainable development is not possible if one half of
humanity continues to be denied its full rights and opportunities. This is also a basic
issue of human rights. Women and girls must enjoy equal access to education and
equal opportunities for employment with men and boys. All forms of gender inequality,
gender-based discrimination and violence against women and children, both boys and
girls, will be combatted. Marginalized and vulnerable populations–including
women, children, youth, people living with disability, older people, migrants, and
indigenous peoples–must fully participate in creating enabling environments for
the implementation of the Agenda. Severe challenges faced by people living in
areas affected by conflict, terrorism and complex humanitarian emergencies must
also be addressed."
3. Paragraph 22
We support the use of agreed language on education as reflected in SDG 4. The
importance of lifelong learning opportunities should be reflected, as well as a reference
to the 2015 World Education Forum, where worldwide leaders in education gathered to
discuss education-related goals of the Post-2015 Development Agenda. We propose to
amend the paragraph to read:
"We commit to providing inclusive and equitable quality education at all levels–early
childhood, primary, secondary and tertiary. All people irrespective of gender, age, race
or ethnicity, including persons with disabilities, indigenous peoples, children and youth
in vulnerable situations, should have access to lifelong learning opportunities that
helps them acquire the knowledge and skills needed to exploit opportunities, to
participate fully in society. We welcome the outcome of the World Education
Forum 2015."
4. Paragraph 27
Land is an important aspect of environmental issues, thus we suggest adding language on
restoration of degraded land, as included in the outcome document of CBD COP12, to
read:
"We are determined to address decisively the threat posed by climate change and
environmental degradation. The global nature of climate change calls for the widest
possible international cooperation aimed at accelerating the reduction of global
greenhouse gas emissions. Looking ahead to the COP 21 conference in Paris in
December, we underscore the historic responsibility of all States to work for a
meaningful and universal climate agreement which will put in place this essential
component of a sustainable world. We must also safeguard our oceans and seas,
protect biodiversity, restore degraded land and promote resilience and disaster
preparedness."
5. Paragraphs 28
While we welcome the reference to good governance, the current text should be further
strengthened. The importance of good governance based on transparency,
accountability, and participation should be better highlighted.
"Sustainable development cannot be realized without peace. The new Agenda
recognizes the need to build peaceful, just and inclusive societies, based on respect for
human rights (including the right to development), the rule of law, good governance
based on transparency, accountability, and participation, as well as effective and
accountable institutions. These are fundamental requirements for the achievement of
sustainable development. Factors which give rise to violence, insecurity and injustice,
such as corruption and poor governance, are addressed in the Agenda. We must
redouble our efforts to resolve or prevent conflict and to support countries emerging
from conflict situations so as to lay the foundations for sustainable development. We
commit to remove the obstacles to the full realization of the right of self- determination
of peoples living under colonial and foreign occupation, which continue to adversely
affect their economic and social development as well as their environment"
Implementation
General comment on the section
The section should reflect in a balanced manner the importance of all financial
flows and actors in the context of an evolving development landscape, as well as
the basic principle that each country has primary responsibility for its own
economic and social development
Creating domestic enabling environments, sound policies and institutions at country
level as the key to poverty eradication and sustainable development must be further
emphasized.
1. Paragraph 30
We propose to add a reference to the importance of an enabling environment as well as
principles of Global Partnership.
"The new Agenda deals also with the means required for implementation of the goals
and targets. We recognize that these will require the mobilization of financial resources
(both public and private, domestic and international) as well as an enabling
environment, capacity- building, the transfer of environmentally sound technologies
and a wide range of other supportive policies and measures. Business, the private
sector and philanthropic organizations will feature prominently in relation to resource
mobilization and implementation of the Agenda. We also emphasize the importance
of internationally agreed principles of the Global Partnership, including the
development effectiveness principles."
2. Paragraph 31
We propose to clearly reference that the Addis Ababa outcome document will become the
MOI pillar of the Post-2015 Development Agenda.
"We welcome and endorse fully the outcome document of the Third International
Conference on Financing for Development, held in Addis Ababa from 13-16 July 2015.
We acknowledge that the Addis outcome constitutes the means of implementation
(MOI) pillar of the post-2015 development agenda."
3. Paragraph 32
The current text overemphasizes the role of ODA. To also reflect the importance of
domestic resource mobilization in a more balanced manner, we propose to amend the
paragraph as the following:
"The mobilization and effective use of domestic resources is at the crux of our
common pursuit of sustainable development and achieving the SDGs, underscored by
the principle of national ownership. We will endeavour to create domestic enabling
environment and encourage private business activity, investment and innovation as
major drivers of productivity, inclusive economic growth, and job creation, providing
people with the opportunity to overcome poverty and inequality."
4. Paragraph 35
We believe national policy space should be consistent with relevant international rules.
"We acknowledge the need for international financial institutions to respect the
domestic policy space of all countries, while respecting international principles and
commitments pertaining to effective development cooperation. We agree to work
to increase the representation of developing countries, and their involvement in
decision-making, in these institutions."
A call for action to change our world
1. Paragraphs 41 & 42
To consolidate relevant content, we propose to combine the two paragraphs to read:
"Today we are taking a decision of comparable significance. Ours can be the first
generation to succeed in ending poverty; just as we are the last to have a chance of
saving the planet. We have resolved to build a better future for millions of people in
our world, millions who have been denied the chance to lead decent, dignified and
rewarding lives and to achieve their full human potential. The world will be a better
place in 2030 if we succeed in our objectives. What we are announcing today – an
agenda for global action for the next fifteen years – is a charter for people and planet in
the twenty-first century."
2. Paragraphs 43 & 44
To consolidate relevant content, we propose to combine the two paragraphs to read:
"“We the Peoples” are the celebrated opening words of the UN Charter. It is “We the
Peoples” who are embarking today on the road to 2030. Our journey will involve
Governments, Parliaments, local authorities, business and the private sector, the
scientific and academic community, civil society – and ordinary citizens. Millions have
already engaged with, and will own, this agenda. It is an agenda by and for the people
– and this, we believe, will ensure its success. The future of humanity and of our planet
lies in our hands. It lies also in the hands of today’s younger generation, who will pass
the torch to future generations. We have mapped the road to sustainable development;
it will be for all of us to ensure that the journey is irreversible."
III. Sustainable Development Goals and Targets
1. Paragraph 3
The reference to the timetable of finalizing the global indicator by March 2016 is too
technical, and would not be appropriate to include in the outcome document. We suggest
deleting the reference to amend the paragraph to read:
"The goals and targets will be followed-up and reviewed using a set of global
indicators. These shall be complemented by indicators at the regional and national
level to be developed by member states. Under the guidance of the Economic and
Social Council and the UN Statistical Commission, the global indicator framework will
be developed by the Inter Agency and Expert Group on SDG Indicators. This
framework will be simple yet robust, address all SDGs and targets and preserve the
political balance and ambition contained therein."
IV. Means of Implementation and the Global Partnership
1. Paragraph 5
The fulfillment of ODA commitments is overemphasized, and the paragraph should be
amended with more balanced language as the following:
"Domestic public resources mobilization will continue to be crucial. We acknowledge
the power and reach of financial inclusion. We note also the critical importance of
private finance and we call on businesses to apply their creativity and innovation and
to engage as partners in the development process. International public finance remains
key and ODA plays a central role in complementing domestic resources."
V. Follow-up and Review
1. Paragraph 1
The element of the universality needs to be added.
"A robust, universal, effective, inclusive and transparent follow-up and review
framework, operating at the national, regional and global levels, will promote effective
implementation of this Agenda and accountability to our citizens."
2. Paragraph 3
The review of effectiveness of development cooperation should constitute an integral part
of the overall review progress. In this regard, the principles of effective development
cooperation – national ownership, focus on results, inclusive partnership, transparency and
accountability – should be highlighted in the document. Shared responsibility and
universality are also important elements that should be reflected in the text. Lastly, we
suggest the addition of the Global Partnership for Effective Development Cooperation
(GPEDC) as a good example of existing platforms.
"Follow-up and review processes shall be guided by the following principles:
a. They will address progress in implementing the goals and targets, including the
means of implementation, in a manner which respects their integrated and interrelated
nature, as well as the quality of development cooperation based on
the principles of national ownership, focus on results, inclusive partnership,
and transparency and accountability.
b. They will maintain a longer-term orientation, identify achievements and critical
success factors, support countries in making informed policy choices and
mobilize the necessary means of implementation and partnerships;
c. They will be universal, open and inclusive, supported by an enabling
environment for the participation of all people and stakeholders, based on
shared responsibility.
d. They will build on existing platforms and processes, including the Global
Partnership for Effective Development Cooperation, evolve over time and
minimize the reporting burden on national administrations.
e. They will be rigorous and evidence-based, informed by data which is timely,
reliable and disaggregated by income, gender, age, race, ethnicity, migratory
status, disability, geographic location and other characteristics relevant in
national contexts. Support for developing countries, particularly LDCs, to
strengthen national data systems is critical."
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